Talk:Chapter 324

Give a Change
It is written:

"Revealing that she took Rogue's hit to protect both of them, seeing as if Lucy died, she, as her future, would die too, the future Lucy quickly asks to see Lucy's Fairy Tail mark, smiling sadly as she closes her eyes and is finally still."

Can I add something like this?

"Revealing that she took Rogue's hit to protect both of them, seeing as if Lucy died, she, as her future, would die too, the future Lucy quickly asks to see Lucy's Fairy Tail mark, smiling sadly as she closes her eyes and is finally still, while her past self cries and commented about her right hand." Or something like that, if you have a better idea. I'm no English. 114.79.0.243 13:09, March 22, 2013 (UTC)