User blog:Wrath022/Chapter 516: The Truth About Enchantment, Review

Okay, so let's start with the fact that this was also supposed to be a double issue, the actual issue for this week goes on sale on Wednesday, the 28 of December. Chapter 516 isn't supposed to come out, if I'm right (pending a reply from Mangastream, or tomorrow's raws) until January 11, 2017 if it is. If I'm wrong, it is supposed to be January 4. Either way, do you see how fucked up that is? Yes? No? Whatever. I'm annoyed already because of how massively and blatantly illegal this is, but since there's no stopping Yonkou shit from getting on the wiki, here it is.

Sooooo the cover is just Lucy again. She may be my third favorite female character, but the covers are starting to annoy me with how simple they are. They're all predominantly the same. FT Girl in outfit that reveals cleavage, ass, or both in a sexy and/or suggestive pose that allows us to view said cleavage, ass, or both.

Anyway, the actual chapter was crap. Straight up garbage. First, ignoring the shoddy Englishing in places, Irene basically tilts herself with her own backstory, which is still stupid. She started telling this whole thing in a last ditch effort for self-redemption, which fails. I'm still trying to figure out why Erza is a Las Vegas, Playboy bunny hybrid. Her swords are cool, but other than that, I'm not seeing why this was even necessary when she has other armors that are less dumb looking, and accomplish the same goal.

''The art is really great. Sadly.''

Anyway, Irene tries taunting Wendy about becoming a dragon, but then finds out that after the war was over, the remaining dragons found a way to ex post facto NTR the whole process, which makes her really pissed. I get her anger, but this is where things get super stupid. Erza manages to land a big hit on Irene thanks to Wendy, who can use enchantments on Irene's level, and then Irene reveals that it's normally impossible to enchant your personality over someone else's, but it can be done if they are compatible on a physical and magical level. Umm...okay, you can do this to Wendy but not your own daughter? Your own flesh and blood? I get why it can be Wendy, but the fact that it can only, just conveniently, be Wendy is irksome. So basically Irene does it after getting a pretty hard hit from Erza. She lays her personality over Wendy's and takes over the girl's body...at the cost of making herself weaker.

So Irene, in this process, makes herself weaker, and then opens the way up for the only way to defeat her. And we still don't know why Irene didn't smell like a dragon, or didn't use any dragon magic if she was still a dragon. Let's break this down though, shall we?

Irene conveniently runs into daughter --> Daughter is conveniently accompanied by the only person Irene can be compatible with --> Irene tells daughter backstory in a fit of minor moral re-polarization --> Irene's own backstory becomes her undoing in a convenient display of who she started telling it to --> Irene conveniently realizes Wendy is her only compatible body because she is conveniently a dragon slayer who conveniently only learned enchantments from her dragon because Irene was conveniently a dragon slayer also --> Irene makes conveniently makes herself weaker and conveniently makes it so the only way she can be defeated is in a mental battle, as her actual body is now uninhabited

So long story short, no explanation on why Irene isn't using dragon magic, why she doesn't smell like a dragon despite still being one, Irene makes it so that the only way she could possibly be defeated is in the circumstance she is in now, where if her mind is killed, she dies too. Overall, backstory was crap, this chapter was crap.

Score : 3/10. Art was the saving grace, but from the bunny armor down to the development of "Wendy Belserion," this was horrid.