User blog comment:IamJakuhoRaikoben/WT Chapter 1: Wiki Tail, Review./@comment-3987368-20120720120033

{[Review|review=m|rating=70|Name=Ultraprime2|mssg=I guess I'm giving a lot of allowance her given that it's the team's first time doing this. Good points include likeable and believable characters. Bad points include a lack of description and a wtf ending that arrived too early in the story. Remember to make readers comfortable first. Other than that, I wish you guys luck on the next one.}}