User blog comment:Miskos3/Fairy Tail 511: The Hell of Starvation, Review/@comment-4829046-20161119172920

I'm not sure if the 'eating each other' *wink* *wink* is supposed to invoke a particular emotion or just a mess of them. I guess it captures the abstract, frenzied and irrational nature of compulsive desire, but it still felt choppy. I honestly think the need to devour others, especially those dear to you, when you are stuck with an insatiable void is a very sound and indeed primal. It is why I love well written zombie/vampire/Titan/ghoul stories. However, in this instance it just felt messy. Sting suddenly snapped out of it and then was given the opportunity to instantly devour the Shadow DS, thus creating a reason for Larcade to reveal the rest of his magic. Everything else was fluff. Let's not forget that Kagura's 'fatal' wound was basically negated, because the moment Sting bonked her on the head, he signed the death certificate. You don't induce a concussion on someone bleeding out, you keep them as aware as possible. But screw logic and tension right?