User blog comment:IamJakuhoRaikoben/Chapter 348: Return of the Demon, Review./@comment-4449950-20130825015706

Okay, I said when I first commented here that I'd write a review, but now I've decided to fuck that and write a chapter/fight prediction instead :D Well, basically I thought this chapter was pretty straightforward and nothing incredibly exciting happened, BUT! seeing Gray at the end just made me flail and scream "No NO NO!!", because if Gray beats this guy I will be so pissed off >__> I mean... seriously? But, he has to win in some way, so, going off my prediction below, here's my version of the perfect next chapter. Enjoy ;D

Gray: *takes stance* Let me show you how it's really done...

SE Mage: Trolololol!! This little fucker thinks he can take me on? XD Go ahead, do your worst >:)

Gray: Ice-Make: Lance!! *a handful of the pissiest little ice toothpicks fly from Gray's hands and prick the SE Mage in the arm*

SE Mage: Oh, ow. Man, that was a harsh attack.

Gray: What!? o__O My Magic abilities are reduced too? This is going to be harder than I thought.

SE Mage: Grown bored already? Come on, I thought you were looking for a fight! *surges forward to deliver a head shot punch*

Gray: *ducks in time to dodge* Huff... Ice-Make: Battle Axe! *a smaller yet still rather good attack hits the SE Mage in his gut*

SE Mage: Uhg... Ya little shit... *kicks out at Gray, who flies back*

Gray: *lands on the ground and looks up. Begins to reminisce himself lying half dead with Deliora stomping around* No... I need to be strong. I will defeat this man! *stands up and takes a stance. Tries to power up all of the Magic he can muster*

SE Mage: 0___0!! Wah!! Aaaaaah! WTF!

Gray: Heh >:) I told you not to mess with me!! *suddenly hears a loud noise and turns around too* 0___0!!

Behind Gray the entire forest has come to life and is walking towards them. At the forefront is Walrot Cken, waving his arms and causing plants to fly in every direction, completely pissed off.

Walrot: You dare to attack a harmless child? You dare to come to this peaceful village and freeze them! *surging forward, Walrot sends a mass of vines/tree roots/wtfeverjustplantlife at the SE Mage, who is struck and flies backwards away from Gray*

Gray: Walrot Cken! o__O So much for no offensive Magic prowess

SE Mage: *pulls himself from the ground* Fuck you!! I'll show you what happens when you mess with me! *waves his hand at Walrot*

Walrot's appearance changes ever so slightly, but he pretty much remains the same.

SE Mage: What? o__O My Regression Magic isn't working??

Walrot: Oh, Regression Magic, how interesting. What a shame I am over 100 years old.

SE Mage: He... He's too old for me to regress! Damn him!

Walrot and the SE Mage exchange a few more blows with the SE Mage taking quite a bit of damage.

Gray: Wow... So much power... So this is one of the Ten Wizard Saints?

SE Mage: *laughs slightly* Your Magic is strong old-timer... But are you just as strong?

The SE Mage suddenly runs past Wlarot's Magic assault and punches him with his incredible strength. Walrot flies backwards and has trouble standing.

SE Mage: As I thought. Your power in Magic doesn't make up for your weakness in body! *continues to deliver a mass of physical blows to Walrot, who can't fight back very well*

Gray: No... I need to help! *stands up and looks down at himself* Wait... am I bigger??

Walrot manages to land a blow on the SE Mage, and as he takes the hit Gray notices that he is getting bigger again.

Gray: It must be tolling him to keep his Magic on me active! But that also means... *Gray shoots an Ice attack towards the SE Mage. It is a lot more powerful and hits him in the back*

SE Mage: Why you little!! *as he turns his back Walrot hits him once more*

Walrot and Gray then proceed to take on the SE Mage together. As they land blows, Gray becomes bigger, so his attacks just keep getting more powerful. Eventually:

Gray: This is for my friends!! (Audience: >__>) Ice-Make: Cold Excalibur! *lands the final blow, knocking the SE Mage to the ground, defeated*

Walrot and Gray exchange a comment about helping each other with their weaknesses >__>

Meanwhile, with Minerva and Erza:

Minerva: *kicks loli Erza into a wall, smashing it and sending dust clouds flying* What is this? The mighty Titania a mere child in front of me!! Hahahaha!! Fight me little girl!! Fight me!! >:D

The dust clears and Erza stands, back to her original size with massive swords in hand, pissed off to no end*

Minerva: O__O!! What!? How!?

Erza: If it's a fight you want, so be it!

End chapter~

If the chapter actually happens something like this, I will be the happiest reader around. It probably won't... I bet Gray just pulls some nakama shit and wins (uuuuuhhhhgg!!) but hey, I can hope right? ;D

I hope you liked it ( .__.)~