User talk:The Venerable Bede

Welcome
Welcome to Fairy Tail Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the File:Aaa fairy tail tree.jpg page, and thanks for joining our community! There's a lot to do around here, so I hope you'll stay with us and make many more improvements.


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 * Questions? You can ask on the "discussion" page associated with each article, or post a message on my talk page!


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Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- IamJakuhoRaikoben (Talk) 00:53, May 31, 2011

Re: Hey
Sorry for the late reply, I've been out of town, and no, you don't have to edit articles to have a profile page.

Policy
Please note that for images to be added to the articles they must follow our image policy.

No problem, and thanks for reviewing them.

Re: Newbie Questions
Well, first you have to copy and paste the infobox and paste it on the page, if it's already there, there's a section that says image= on the infobox and you just put... image= and that should do the trick, if you have anymore questions feel free to leave them on my talk page.

No, not at all.

No, it would actually be better to keep their younger appearance out of the pages.

No, images from google do not violate policy. Any image is acceptable on the site as long as it's not pornographic, but to be used on the articles it must be from the anime or the manga, it doesn't matter which site you get it from, and fair use images are simply images that have the fair use template on them. The fair use template is simply for anime,  for manga and  for any image that highlights only one character instead of multiple. Also when uploading an image, don't forget to add the fair use rationale, and be sure to read the uploading text because it can help you out alot. View the picture for an example of a correctly licensed image with the correct fair use rationale. If you have any more questions don't hesitate to ask.

When you first upload an image there is something in the summary box, that is called a fair use rationale, fill that out, and select a license from the drop down menu and the image is considered fit for use. Other users know it has a rationale when they view the file page for the image.

I'm not quite understanding your problem, the summary box should be right below the upload a file button.

The box should say Summary Box and it's below a box that says Destination File name.

No problem.

Not quite yet, I am currently constructing all of Erza's armor pages, and they aren't complete yet. When they are they will be posted as an actual article instead of a template page.

Appearance Sections
Yes, please do. If you see any character without an appearance or a personality section add it.

Re: Question
You can look at this page for info. I just copied the code and edited it. Hope that answers your question...

Signature
Hey, I've noticed that you are having some problems with your signature. Need some help? 14:20, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Just go to User:Ximon Vargas/Sig2 and paste the code for your Signature there. Then go to User:Ximon Vargas/Sig and type the first one. Then go to your preferences and type I can do the first two steps for you if you'd like. 14:32, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

The first two steps are done, now you have to do the third one. Let me know if it didn't work. and don't worry it's no bother, it's my job as the chairman of the council and someone had to do it for me once. 14:38, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome. Sorry about the time, i don't know how to fix that since the code is so long. 14:51, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

lol. Again, it's no bother. If you need help with anything else, don't hesitate to ask. 14:59, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you can edited by going to User:Ximon Vargas/Sig2. 15:06, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Signature Advice
Hi. Just noticed that you were having some trouble with your signature. If you are still having trouble, here are some tips on shortening the signature code and adding a time stamp:


 * If you want to add a signature with would occupy less space, use this code: instead of ~ . This would give you.


 * If you want to add a time stamp, use this code: which would give you.

If you are still having some trouble with your signature or just want to stop by and say hi, you are free to leave a message at my talk page and I would get back to you as soon as I can.

Your Welcome!

Links
Don't unlink parent magic of spell pages. 22:21, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok. Next time, just make sure you are fully awake before editing. 22:30, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Site Images
I was worried about that. I'll fix them all now. Thanks for considering joining our guilds.

Re: What a coincidence...
I'm from QC :) 11:51, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Anywhere on the site really.

It should be the user.

Re: Question
No. But only MSG members are allowed to get jobs from the MSG. 20:47, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

All guilds. But the mages of the image guild gets angry with people who do their jobs. 08:45, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Well we have a category called "Needs Help" you can search through those pages and see if there's anything you can help with.

Several sections of Natsu's article needs referencing, expansion, shortening and the entire article needs a grammar check.

Grammar Guild
Hi there! =)

No need to have joined another guild to enter the incoming (hopefully... Damn tardy Rai >.<) one, you'll only have to undergo a little test. Let me paste and copy the instructions here for you so that I don't have to write them down again :P.

"The test is pretty simple: just tell me about yourself in five sentences. If you don't feel at ease by revealing personal information to a stranger living in the other part of the world, feel free to invent something fictional, what you tell me doesn't have to make sense... The point is writing five mildly long and articulate sentences. Three or less grammar errors in such sentence, and you're in!"

Think that was pretty explanatory... Want to give it a try?

-- 18:58, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Looks very good! I only found a mistake, this being in the following sentence: "What I'm passionate about is dancing, I love to dance hip-hop and I feel happy just to make my own dance choreography to certain songs of my own choosing and I hope to be a great dancer someday and having the chance to work with famous choreographers.". As far as I know (I'm not perfect either :P) that "having" should have been "have". Anyhow, nice vocabulary! ;)

Congratulations, you made it! Welcome to the Grammar Guild! I'll add your name to the list =D

-- 14:17, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

You're welcome, and I'm sure you'll do great! ;)

-- 15:18, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

It looks good, thank you ;)

-- 15:30, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

hi ximon! i am erza, makarov in the chat gave me a link to ur profile. well then, nice to meet u.

You can change your username here (Just click the link) http://help.wikia.com/wiki/Help:Changing_your_username

Ohoh, my dear Ximon, that's all about... WHAT?! O_o

-- 16:25, May 18, 2012 (UTC)

It's not that I don't want you to do something, it's that I didn't understand what you meant there O_o

-- 07:19, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Fans who don't know what they're saying can suck our translator's... Well, this is hard... You know, genderless O_o xD

-- 08:55, May 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Jobs
...


 * Gajeel Redfox worth 20,000 *Job Completed*  (Just tell me what to be fixed too.. ^^)

Ximon, would you mind reading the list before asking for jobs...? -.-"

-- 07:33, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

xD

-- 08:40, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Go ahead mate! How 'bout... 10.000 Jewels? He's been around since the start of the series but appeared "sporadically"... Sounds good?

-- 09:03, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

Mages technically aren't allowed to add things to the board Go ahead.

-- 09:10, May 20, 2012 (UTC)

If you think 5,000 will do it, then you can edit the list ;)

-- 18:17, May 22, 2012 (UTC)

FSG
Welcome to the Fight Summary Guild! 19:01, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sure! Just tell me when you need me to get you the pictures and I will 03:50, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sure. I'll upload one right away 13:48, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

here you go 13:55, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Any time 14:00, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to merge Natsu Dragneel vs. Jiemma and Natsu Dragneel vs. Dobengal to just Natsu Dragneel vs. Sabertooth. Do you still want to take the job? 14:57, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Alright and since you started writing first I'll give the job to you. 15:02, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

No, I just moved it to Natsu Dragneel vs. Sabertooth and left that as a redirect to the new page 15:07, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

yes as its still part of the fight 15:12, May 26, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Ximon, I appreciate it ;)

-- 10:11, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Picture Problem
Of course, of course. What is the problem? 13:16, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

OK that's because pictures are automatically aligned to the right of the page, to put them on the left you have to put left aligning. For example, to have an image aligned to the right you just put: to have it aligned to the left, you put: That's all. Does this help? 13:32, May 27, 2012 (UTC)

Grammar Guild Job
Hello.

As you may know, Aldarinor will be less active for a while and so I've taken his permission to check completed jobs and give him the updates.

You've marked your jobs on the Macao Conbolt page and the Evergreen page Completed. However, when I inspected it closely, I saw several visible errors which are in need of correction.

Remember that you can copy the page into Microsoft word, run the page through a spell check and judge whether or not the change it is telling you to make is actually a correct change. If so, go back into the actual article and make the change. Once you have gone through the spell check, give it a read through and make sure that everything flows and that you did not miss anything.

There are also some errors which can't be picked up by Microsoft word and so you will have to manually read through the article. Most of these particular errors in the Macao page are in the Grand Magic Games section of the article while they are in the Tenrou Island arc section of Evergreen's page..

Hope this helps you out and you can let me know when you are done so I may check the page again.

11:14, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Here's a suggestion
Rather than posting and undoing because it doesn't look good, why not try the preview button to see how it shows up first? 15:21, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Hey
hi itz very nice to meet u i've seen u editing so i wanted to say hi so hi XD btw im rina just incase u want to know. 22:26, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Thanks
harhardyharhar XD jk ur queit the funny person XD 22:55, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

The Grammar Guild Jobs
Hello.

I'm glad to see you've read my previous message about your job on the Evergreen page.

While I can see you've made some edits, the page is still far too incomplete in terms of tenses and grammar to be considered finished. Therefore, I've changed the mark from *Job Completed* to *Taken*.

Please redo it and mark it completed when you are finished. Remember to look carefully into it as not all mistakes can be caught by MS Word. Many of the errors are still in the same section, as well as a few spread out elsewhere.

Thank you. For the record, your edits to the Macao Conbolt page seem fine.

07:40, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Picture Problem
Or, you could just tell me to do it for you XD 20:44, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

XD anyway, good work on Natsu Dragneel vs. Sabertooth! 22:18, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Good! Just one thing, each paragraph must have at least one sentence. 22:24, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

lol I mean reference! Each paragraph must have at least one reference! Why did I say sentence? My fault XD 22:38, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

yeah lol my fault :) 22:47, May 30, 2012 (UTC)

Prof Pic
I don't think so. the last panel of this would look great if it wasn't for the Fairy Tail logo in the way. I guess this will have to do... 19:28, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Date
It's July 1st, X791 17:59, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sig
Hey Ximon, I took the liberty of fixing your signature since a  tag was missing and it was causing problems with the Hidden template. Hope you don't mind.

I don't know what you're talking about xD

It starts from the beginning of that chapter since At the beginning there were already balloons. I'm writing this from my iPod so you better be grateful! 05:23, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

I'll say Ish. Also, if you're looking for some chibi images. Here's some.

lol it was an iPod Touch. But now I'm in my computer so you can ask anything ^.^ 15:00, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

lol I should have said so XD. Mmmm... well, even though it isn't part of the inauguration, it does have to do as to why Wendy isn't participating and has been replaced by Elfman in the ceremony. So yes. 15:45, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! ^.^ 15:50, June 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yes! 17:39, June 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re:GG Issues
Hi Ximon! No, it's not yet implemented, because unfortunately, not everyone in the Guild has voted on it yet. Also, if you don't mind, would you please "cast your vote" in our Guild's talk page? This is so it'd make it "official". Thanks! And about the apostrophes, I actually include them. XD But that's because from the articles I've previously seen, they were included, so I only took after them. LOL. But it seems majority would like them excluded, so maybe they'll be taken down after we settle these issues. :)  01:43, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your support! *Salutes* And what do you mean you like the way I think? XD  01:49, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Nice~! Oh stop it you~ About the jobs, let's see... well how about this: you take on jobs, and then if you have an idea of how much you'd like to get for it, just tell me. Even if you don't, still, tell me. XD But don't put it up in the Request Board yet. We'll do that when Cap'n gets back. ;) Also, maybe you should inform Ultra-san about this as well, especially when you start taking jobs.  02:18, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

I check them, but I'm not the one to move them in the Completed Archive. Again, that's for Master to do. And the S-class mages, but we don't have any. XD So when you finish them, I can check them for you, and inform the Master for your work to be moved to the Archive. 02:28, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

02:40, June 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * Phineas voice* Yes. Yes he'll be. XD Anyway, if you need any more help, just tell me, alright? :D

Re:Sig
I should give you a thanks for that. -- Rica Mae Caaya 02:46, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

Hi. Sorry for my late reply. And yes! We must get along very well! *Rock Lee pose* 04:17, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

It went nicely I'd say, thanks ;)

Does 1,000 each sound fair?

-- 14:03, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Renaming
No go ahead you can do it. And I just noticed that I have bunch of jobs to check... tomorrow is going to be a busy day... 03:46, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Images
Please redo the FUR and license for these images. Add the episode where the screenshot was taken and add the proper license or I will tag it for deletion.

Yes. They're fine.

Re:Check
No problem, Ximon-kun! Although I owe you an apology for not checking your work earlier. Don't worry. I assure you it'll be tallied for the month of June. LOL. 14:12, June 11, 2012 (UTC)

Jewels
lol that's because when it was created over a year ago, Rai just didn't make it with jewels. You aren't the first to complain about it, but I"m not sure how I could make it work since all fights have different lengths, but I'm welcoming any suggestions 17:02, June 14, 2012 (UTC)

THANK YOUUU!!
Yay! Thanks for remembering Ximon!!! Don't worry. I haven't forgotten about rechecking your jobs. xD  11:27, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

I only increased my edit count became super active since I joined the Grammar Guild. XD Lechon talaga? xD Haha. Wala eh. XD Ta's ubos na 'ung cake. Chos! 11:42, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

May ice cream naman! :D Let's see... about the image, I made it without a background in Photoshop and saved it as a .PNG file. 11:52, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Happy Birthday
Awwww... whilst we are keeping it formal...  *curtseys* It's a pleasure to finally be formally introduced to you Ximon!

And of course you can call me Carrot!! Heck, you can call me whatever the hell you want... that's what most people here do XD

And thank you for your wishes! :)

<3 12:16, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

only me and the S-Class Mages 18:41, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

you can take them! 00:20, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

take whatever you want! You want their soul too? Take them! You want Lucy in your bed? Take her! You want Rai in your bed too? Take him! XD 00:27, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! ewwwwww I want Lucy! 00:33, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

I'll have 2 Lucys! 00:37, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

ew I don't want your seconds! I'll just take Mira then... 00:43, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

You are even bigger perv than I thought Ximon! You fit well in this wiki XD 00:53, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

lol you sounds just like us! 01:03, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

lol 1k! Congratz! 01:23, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

of course! 01:35, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Message
Oh!! Sorry i didn't notice your message 5 days ago! xD Oh well, open a photo editor then use Magic Wand tool in the white part then erase... That's all xD Use Pixlr just an advice xD   09:35, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Answer's in Google! ^_^  11:12, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

No problem! Glad to help ;) And yes you may cal me Red ^_^  11:40, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Fight
Yes, you may remove their signature and put yours instead. Which fight are you talking about? 15:11, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

I don't remember that fight stopping and then restarting. Just put the events in the order that they happened and its just the fight until they split up. In other words, the fight ends when Lucy runs away with Michelle 15:28, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

No problem Xperv 15:45, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

yes, you are. You want to have Freed! XD 15:55, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

you love a gay person nonetheless... ^.^ everyone is getting burned today! 16:00, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

lol that was kind of... sick... 16:13, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

wow... I can't believe you actually talked me into looking it up... now I'll never look at any woman the same way... 16:18, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

I saw him/her. And I won't look at women the same way cuz I won't know what their real gender is 16:28, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

yup 16:58, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

oooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk 17:18, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hey ^_^
Yeah sure, welcome in the Epic Family Son ♥ XD I think Daddy is cheating on me >.> but we'll see where it goes XDXD

Well yeah probably drunk XDXD

Re:Permission
Sure knock yourself out. -- 13:21, June 19, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Spoiler
This guy made it public 13:52, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Banners
Hi Ximon....

Actually, I just copied them from User:Scarletwind's page. I'm not so good with banners.... (still learning but hopefully I will make my own banner soon!)

-- 15:38, June 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Blah & stuff
I'm not in favor of it too!!! Luckily I got someone who supports me xD Am I right? No..? So I am wrong? :( And what are you saying that it's like a real one? >_> And also, just stop supporting that one and i'll forgive a traitor like you.  12:30, June 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hey Do you know that i am just confirming and just telling that "if can be" you know.

GG
Hey, Ximon-kun! Long time no talk. :D I checked Evergreen's page, and I noticed that there are a lot of missing links. There's nothing wrong with the grammar; just the links and some punctuation marks. Also, if it isn't too much of a bother, if you could rewrite things such as "5 mins" into "five minutes" for formality's sake, that'd be awesome. Other than that, 's all good. :D 03:12, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

Aye, 's no problem. Tell me when you finish, and if there's anything else in need of checking. 05:06, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's mostly because I've been busy with... other stuffs. LOL. Not the If-you-know-what-I-mean kind of thing... wait, who even brought up that topic in the first place? Also, since school began, I've been more preoccupied with homework and stuffs than I'd like. I thought college-life would be a lot less loose than high school had been, now that all those annoying artsy projects are out of the picture, but I guess I'm wrong. 11:41, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

I thought you were older than me!!! LOL. OMG. XD Actually, high school is a lot more hectic than college is, IMO. 'S just that the lessons are def. harder than what we had back in high school. And you're on your own now, so you have to watch out for yourself. I'm not scaring you! XD  13:22, June 24, 2012 (UTC)

'Kay. 00:36,6/25/2012

You're not blocked... 01:51,6/25/2012

XD, you're no trouble at all. 01:56,6/25/2012

I saw the block thing.....Wiki Bug....Or maybe you made an account and it was blocked. 01:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Aye Sir. 02:04, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Job
lol of course Darth Vader lets you take it ^_^. anyway, how does the seminary work? is it like school? Do you comeback to your house every 2 weeks? or does it only take 2 weeks and is over? I'm not familiar with seminaries... 02:05, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

wow... are you in it willingly or are you forced? 02:19, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

lol why did you choose to go there? 02:25, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

lol so are you allowed to have computers in there? 02:37, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

wow... sucks for you... well, I'll miss you here in the wiki my son, but please visit us whenever you have the chance XD 02:45, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

I hope so. By the way, don't forget to add your sig to the job you want to take at the FSG 02:57, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

Y U NO LEAVE ME ALONE?? (bad grammar intended)15:47,6/25/2012

lol sure, but I think there was a good one already uploaded to the wiki. Have you checked in the Screenshot category of the episode? 23:09, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

lol which discussion were you looking at? ^_^ 23:18, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

oh lol I thought you were looking at the archive of the talk page 23:24, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

that's what happens when you get bored XD 23:37, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

lol go to the wedding and celebrate! 00:11, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

lol you are proud that she got forced into getting married? XD 00:36, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

But she didn't approve... she was forced! Dun! Dun! Dun! 00:36, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Red's hell doesn't even compare to Ishthaks' hell XD 00:43, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Of course, of course. One day your father will teach you how to survive the wrath of the demon we like to call Ishthak ^__^ 00:53, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

lol fine. I'll do it tomorrow cuz I'm too lazy to do it now XD 01:04, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

of course. who doesn't?! XD 01:11, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

-__- 01:22, June 26, 2012 (UTC)

Block
If you want to report users, for vandalism or anything that is consider a violation of the wiki's policy, you just put up a request. One of the FT's wiki admins will see it, decide if that person should be blocked, and then block that user :D. Hope this helps. Lol, yes, you can call me Mega :) . 00:55, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

The same way you would report any user.

. 01:07, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry for the late response, I had to go. Anyways, All images need to have FUR and License. If a user uploads an Image, and does not place the FUR & License on it, you give them the image warning. I will leave him the warning now, go look at his talk. 01:53, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

And yes, you do place the if, and only if, that picture does not have the FUR and Licensing :D. Or if it violates the Image Policy (Ex: Porn...). 01:58, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Lmao :P I HATE my fucking connection to, but I hate my computer even more. 03:08, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

Job
Hey Ximon, I've been told you had some issues while working on Evergreen's page. Did something happen?

-- 14:34, June 27, 2012 (UTC)

lol I forgot. I'll get it for you right now 03:24, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

here you go 03:34, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Don't worry, you didn't disappoint me. Mhm... Talk to Ultra. He's supposedly the best of us when it comes to grammar. Ask him about your seeming mistakes. Maybe you'll manage to improve or solve the problem.

-- 12:06, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

[http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100317235419/onepiece/images/archive/d/db/20100815072407!Whitebeard_marine_HQ.JPG I am indeed! Gurarararararara!]

-- 13:28, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Job
Hi Ximon.

I see you've talked to Aldarinor about your jobs in the Grammar Guild and so I'll now help you with a few issues.

The thing is, many issues on the page are minor but collectively, they can't be ignored. They also can't be spotted by Microsoft Word, so don't feel bad about not using it.

I'll give you a few examples of errors if it helps.

"Evergreen, along with the rest of the others, returns to the Fairy Tail Guild after being found by Bisca, Alzack, Jet, Droy, and the Trimens from Blue Pegasus."

There, it should've been returns.

There are different types of errors as well.

Evergreen is later seen resting alongside Elfman, Mirajane and Gajeel, having succumbed to her wounds.

This one is not so much a grammar error as it is a case of poor wording. Succumbed to injures implies that one has been fatally wounded and died. Evergreen did not die though. Best replace this with something like attempting to recover from her wounds.

Evergreen apologizes to Elfman for not being able to make him an S-Class Mage, to which he replies that it was only her that allowed him to make it this far. They thank each other as the tower blows up

This sentence should include something about her being his partner as it's too vague otherwise. If we see any mistakes, grammar or not, it's still something we should correct. Wouldn't you agree?

You can now go on and please take a more careful look at everything.

I hope this has helped you and if you have more questions, feel free to ask.

13:46, June 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, many people find me to be very strict but I don't always have to be that way unless I think it's necessary.

So go ahead and edit what you can find and after you mark the job completed, I'll check it out.

14:11, June 28, 2012 (UTC)