User blog comment:FairyRaven/Fairy Tail Chapter 336: In Order to Live Today to the Fullest, Review and Commentary/@comment-103.14.62.71-20130621235700/@comment-4829046-20130622032742

It seems you brought this to the wrong place anon =P. I'm also aspiring to make novels and I come up with stories with waaay fewer plot-holes than this and less rushed storyline(in fact its suuuuuuper slow). Problem is, I'm alone with no one to help me improve. Mashima has editors and assistants and still messes up. I'm a worthless noob who randomly gives his work to be read by friends and family and not getting a proper critical analysis but my stories still manage to capture their interest, albeit only if they like action and read books, those without any literal background find it difficult to understand especially with the complicated words and the teen terminology and the massive amount of death and brutality.