User blog comment:IamJakuhoRaikoben/Chapter 333: Man and Man, Dragon and Dragon, Man and Dragon, Review./@comment-5580383-20130605185931/@comment-4829046-20130606051223

It will be a good story but you need good publishers and sponsors if you want it to be popular.

Also, keep it anonymous, otherwise people will copy it. I always leave the names and my own concepts a secret.

You need to plan out the characters extremely well. They need to be shaped by the back-stories.

A series with the same characters appearing over and over again with no new gen? Sounds like a lot of plot holes. Usually when a series ends, there is a time-span of months or years. The original main cast do appear but they don't have the spot-light. For instance, one has become the strongest on the planet or something and its up to him to train the next gen or something like that. You see, character development must be taken into consideration, one of the faults with most series is that the characters didn't develop as much as they should have personality-wise. Take any of the big 3 as an example. Ichigo is still an emo after 17 months, Naruto is still Naruto after 2 years albeit, with a lot less "Believe it!" even though the others have matured massively, and the One Piece cast? Don't get me started.

Try to avoid a Goku, where you get one guy always getting more OP every season and is still OP even when turned into a kid and apparently made immortal with no real reason as to what happened afterwards. The ending of GT was cliche and many consider GT to never have happened.

This is where my story has its major flaw; how do I pace the MC in a way people don't see a Goku? Cause my character is omnipotent, however unlike Goku, has lived for many more generations and has major character development that it becomes contradictory. Then I had an epiphany. My character is not just one single person, so the Goku effect can't happen. There is a reason for his OP that has nothing to do with nakama power and power of love/feelings but I still need a professional opinion cause people find it weird that an omnipotent person has to struggle in a fight.