User blog comment:IamJakuhoRaikoben/Chapter 361: The Two Bombs, Review./@comment-7418318-20131123093523/@comment-7418318-20131123173849

Sadist... hmm... somehow that makes my already bad feeling about the next chapter even worse...

Even more so since I endlessly argue about Lucy not being useless and how she should get a chance to shine and yet here I'm using her as a tear-jerker, without ever leaving her a chance. I guess it is partially justified, since she has already taken so much damage from just a single one of Jackal's attacks and it was pretty much over for her the moment she fell into his trap...

But at least Jackal will pay for what he did (what I made him do? O.O) to Lucy!

... but I'm getting three chapters ahead of myself.

Feel free to point out any grammer and spelling mistakes you hapen to notice. When checking it over for the fourth time I found some cringe-worthy mistakes I had made and overlooked the first three times (like "yes", instead of "eyes" for example).