User blog comment:Conza17/Nine Gates and Nine Circles/@comment-7740542-20131119013819

interesting blog, couple of notes:


 * 1) in your "what are the nine circles" intro you put the second circle in the same paragraph of circle number 1 instead of creating a new paragraph.
 * 2) i love a woman's personality, in fact its my favourite part of a woman.
 * 3) wouldnt Franmaulth be gluttony cause of his "largeness".
 * 4) also if people are blow around in the second circle to "[symbolize] how lust can blow you about needlessly and aimlessly in life" shouldnt Tempesta be the nine demon gate of lust?
 * 5) which would make Sayla greed i guess......wonder how that would work out.
 * 6) maybe Silver betrayed/will betray someone/a group of people besides tartorus.
 * 7) you made a few grammatical errors.