User blog:FairyTailKnight/Nalu (First written fanfiction)

That's what I have so far...Let me know what you think by commenting down below. You could also help, by giving ideas.
 * At the Fairy Tail guild* "What were you thinking Natsu!?" Erza exclaims. "That's just it, he wasn't thinking at all!" Gray answers. Erza begins walking back and forth, muttering to herself. "Calm down Erza." Mira tells her. Mira takes Erza outside to calm her down. Meanwhile Master Makorav was asking Natsu what happened. Natsu begins to tear up right before he gives his answer. "We were all heading back to the guild," Natsu begins. "When a rouge mage catches us off guard. Erza of course gets ready to attack, but I'm already chasing him. While he was distracting us, another mage runs out and kidnaps Lucy! I should have realized it was stupid of me to attack! And now Lucy is GONE! All because of me!" By the end of the story, Natsu had brokedown, and was crying.