User blog:Iron.Shadow.Dragon/Taking a new challenge in My Life: Story Writing

I'm now trying to get into story writing, this is what I really want to do with this pathetic life of mine. Yesterday, I formulated a plot on what the story would be like. I want anyone's thoughts of what you think with this kind of story..

Other Stuffs:

 * The old generation of descendants uses the soul of the Four Beasts as their weapons. (The same weapons that the new generation will be using.)
 * The four beasts are named Byakko, Seiryu, Genbu and Suzaku.
 * There are four emblems in the Golden Dragon's possession that will be used to activate the power of the Four Beasts.
 * Final enemies would be based on the Seven Sins

I usually have grammar failures so if you notice one, please correct me.