User blog comment:CNBA3/Fairy Tail Zero Up!!!/@comment-173.69.32.29-20140717223349

I liked it, but I felt that maybe Mashima could have spent more time fleshing out Mavis' past before Hades, Warrod and Yuri showed up. Maybe devoted the entire first chapter to it. I didn't feel like I got enough time to give a shit about Zeira or how badly the guild treated her. Still, a pretty decent start and I wanna see more of the FT founders.