User talk:LightningGeist

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Wiki Milestones
Hi! Think it would be nice to make a note that Scallion was the 4000th page created for the site? It's great of course noting Fairy Tail info, but milestones concerning the wiki itself could also be pretty sweet? It's an impressive achievement and all, good to be duly noted! S3r0-Ph1i (talk) 20:42, September 7, 2018 (UTC)

Greetings
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Erza's Armor stats
Hello, so on volume 4 extra pages shows both Lucy's Celestial Spirits Magic Stats and also 3 of Erza's armors stats too. How come those aren't displayed like Lucy's spirits stats are? Starpower98 (talk) 22:25, September 9, 2018 (UTC)

Pentadrakes
LightingGeist The Five Holy Pentadrakes are in the new fairy tail continuation Fairy Tail 100 year quest and the author is Hiro Mashima and anouther guy read it on kissmanga on any other manga website hen they are first mentioned they are called the 5 holy dragons or sonething like that but the next chapter they are known as the 5 holy Pentadrakes that is my reason why you should'nt delete this page. Conehead minion (talk) 01:40, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

I understand just delete the page. Conehead minion (talk) 02:05, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Redirect
i'd just leave it cause it's a redirect, only made it cause this fucking kid keeps spamming up and down lol-- 02:17, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Re: Spammer
Done and done. 14:39, September 12, 2018 (UTC)

Spin offs
Hey, you know how all of the material from the spin-offs is not going to be covered and what has been set up so far is going to be deleted? I was going to make a wiki for the spin-offs, if I do so would it be alright for me to move the info on this wiki about them over to that one (Five Bridge Familia for example). --Neffyarious (talk) 15:57, September 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Would it be okay to use the coding from this wiki's templates as well? Would save time. --Neffyarious (talk) 16:17, September 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks again. I'll get back to you once the wiki has it's ground work laid out. --Neffyarious (talk) 16:28, September 14, 2018 (UTC)
 * Here it is, it's really basic at the moment. --Neffyarious (talk) 19:52, September 14, 2018 (UTC)

Natsu
LightningGeist remember when Lucy rewrote the book of END which turned him into a human and the demon and dragon seed no longer exist inside natsu so instead of Being negative lets put Human on Natsu. Conehead minion (talk) 20:36, September 16, 2018 (UTC)

Ash Magic
I'll at least create ash magic cause it was described in detail this chapter and add it, it's probably bone dragon slayer magic he uses as his primary but I'll wait for it later, stream's translation is always bad 01:27, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

I checked and subzero silver was right it's bone dragon slayer magic, corpse is just another translation of it through google translate, I can create the page and if it turns out that ash magic is just an ability of bone dsm than we can just merge and delete. I agree to leave mercuphobia's water alone until more info, it's obviously not called water magic 11:43, September 19, 2018 (UTC)

Hi!
Hey, was it an accident to revert this edit? It was technically more accurate, and the changes to the sentence structure made it more concise and read much better. Not to mention the large amount of additional relevant information added for the benefit of the page. References to fights throughout the text works great, and do you agree that the the point regarding the French nobleman from the enlightenment period should be a trivia point? Not connected with Fairy Tail after all? May I undo it to all the constructive amendments I made? Rather than undo the entire thing and all the good it entails, if there are specific points that could be altered that could work well? Let's work together to make something extra nice! S3r0-Ph1i (talk) 18:13, October 1, 2018 (UTC)

Oh my actual goodness, I honestly don’t know what to say. Even after reading the manual of style, and putting in a solid effort to refine the page, to learn that every edit violates a policy. I am thankful for your perspective, but there are some notable points that need to be corrected. These are points that could be altered; I’ll clarify each one working top to bottom, and number ones that should change for the better. Technicalities are good for encyclopaedias and in lieu of “Light Green” fluorescent, or Neon Green would be a more accurate name for Freed’s hair colour, which is consistent throughout. So for example let’s number a suggested change: 1) hair Light green to Neon green. Got it regarding altered magical appearances, though with Freed’s right eye, Mirajane and others, might it be productive to add their appearances with self induced magical effects? 2) “Tied in a short ponytail with a grey ribbon” is accurate and mentions this item at the very least. 3) His trench coat is dark red; a trench coat is one that extends below the knees. Was there a specific tie the author has in mind? It does appear to be a tucked in ruffled tie in keeping with his inspired clothing. Readers may come across the description and wonder why it says he has light-colored pants when they’re clearly dark. If not brackets, perhaps a reference could indicate dark in the anime to avoid confusion? 4) His boots are knee high; “boots” can encompass various footwear so it’s good to be more specific. You’re right, though they have their use, the images are nicely set with the text, so span tags aren’t even needed as a backup at this point (remember portability with phones/tablet views and the like). Correct again, it does makes sense to be in the appearance section, but since French enlightenment period clothes are not an in-universe theme for Fairy Tail, the reference to non-universe concepts would make it more suited as a Trivia point. His attire is already described in the “Appearance” section, think it would make sense to add that out of universe reference to Trivia?

When words were deleted it was to make the sentences read better, and as I say refine them. 5) For example, instead of: “as well as a pair of thin strands jutting out backwards from the sides of his head, both shaped like lightning bolts” doesn’t: “as well as a pair of thin lightning bolt shaped strands jutting out backwards from the sides of his head” appear more concise and read better? In addition “There are four yellow buttons” over “buttons closing said coat are four;” of which the change also specifies the previously unmentioned colour. Even if it is a quirk of the wiki writing style, perhaps these could be altered, and maybe the description of his sheath. The only grounds involving deletion were the order and type of descriptive words, with official information untouched. The page does not appear to be set in stone, and so improving the structure, making it more concise and read better as with the above examples cannot fall afoul of violating the wiki’s policies, surely? Indeed it is additionally fulfilling what you are after, namely making the content more simplified as well. I’ll disregard punctuation, the sentence format is that of the wiki’s, that’s fine. Goes without saying we’re both after the best article for the page, bias won’t be an issue. 6) A good change is to include links to the fights as they are introduced for navigation purposes. They can be at the end as well so they’re all together. When reading, it’s helpful to have links spaced out strategically rather say, if you want to check a fight you would have to scroll all the way to the bottom, then back up to find your place again. The edits do reflect Freed’s views; the best word was also used to describe his reactions. Shipping and emotional concepts were not a factor in the writing, it was neutral, speaking in matter of fact manner. 7) One example is “overjoyed” rather than the more neutral to the point where it doesn’t work as a description “happy.” No expanded, subjective, certainly not fanboyish?! Haha observations, just the describe as you examine style.

8) If the article is going to comment on Freed’s “homosexual tendencies” rather than depict him as a voyeur of some sort (though that would be a non issue regardless for him), the most important and meaningful “homosexual tendency” should be included, namely his noted affinity towards Laxus. This is the most notable instance, indeed other characters comment and it seems odd to neglect to mention it. “Devotion” to use his own word, describes it best – there’s the required neutrality. The article is correct with “unable to fight” since he never directed an attack when the, uh bikini card was used, that can remain. Mentioning the fight was against Cana and Lucy should be there, both for detail and explaining why it was a deliberate defeat. 9) “going so far as to decline his chances to become an S-class mage when he saw his opponent was Cana” that is a key detail both for a testament of his honour bound code of conduct, and what he would do to pay back a debt he felt he owed to Cana. Even more notable when Freed remained distant from people before, and obviously their background. Emphasis on enchantment traps might be useful? “Guild” can be kept off Fairy Tail, no problem. 10) Emphasizing they disappeared in a flash of lightning is needed, I mean after that proclamation did they just leave through the door or something?! 11) Touch ups like emphasising Freed’s sword skills when defeating Reedus, it’s not just a ceremonial writing utensil, he has skill with it. The details concerning the thunder palace (will an outside reader even know what that is?) are ever useful.

12) This is a key point of elucidation, Freed does not obey Laxus out of fear, but since he is his commander, his only ally. It is Laxus’ resolve that Freed understands and obliges with, with further confirmation that he would follow him into hell. Freed does not display fear, rather concern, but the main implication that he serves Laxus out of intimidation is incorrect and a disservice to their bond. Again wording that the Fairy Law spell can “discern” gives it more depth than “knew,” words like boat or ship are your call. Cana definitely does “unleash” her sexy lady card, in abundance! Freed’s “euphoric delight” is accurate considering his viewable reaction; it’s also great insight into a person who rarely shows his feelings. Minuscule wording changes make a large constructive improvement, though the article would benefit from the numbered changes above. If you went to the effort to add so much, to have it undone because of a few minor things and some misunderstandings, would that be fair? If I make these modified changes, and you can tweak if you would like, it’s a good combined effort to make the page nicer at any rate, don't you think? S3r0-Ph1i (talk) 16:03, October 2, 2018 (UTC)

Sure always happy to help, and it’s okay I understand, I’d only like to add details rather than change a writing style format though. Each wiki develops it’s own, that’s perfect. The only major thing we could look into format wise is expanding on appearance sections to detail magically induced changes in appearance further down the line.

It’s nice of you to note, as it stands especially since they are largely in the beginning stages in the grand stage of events, I must remain set on building and expanding these other wiki’s, but can still add slight amendments here like with Freed’s page if that helps. Though like you say the good news is the Fairy Tail anime is coming up, and with the 100 years manga that’s a possible anime adaption as well. Whilst I’m here, one suggestion could be to make pages for the Blu-ray and DVDs for Fairy Tail in the same manner Seraph of the End is doing. The contents and more specifically the artwork would be excellent to gather here. Good idea with getting admins views, but with this case so long as I stick to the format shall I add the extra details for Freed’s page? We can all discuss with admins and others regarding DVD pages, links to battles and so forth at a later date if that sounds good. S3r0-Ph1i (talk) 18:18, October 2, 2018 (UTC)

Sounds good, minor though constructive additions count for a lot. Yes that’s a good idea for Freed, particularly a written description in the relevant magic appearance section. Got it with the out of universe description, again the wiki’s own developed format comes first and that works well here. As I say DVD changes were a thinking out loud suggestion for further afield, particularly the specific details for each. Though of course incoming events have priority. Thank you for your helpful viewpoints in these matters. S3r0-Ph1i (talk) 15:06, October 3, 2018 (UTC)

Yakuma
The official translation says he's one of the 18 battle gods like Yagdo Rigola here he's one of the 18 magics passed down by yakuma gods, and is among the 18. so the same as Yagdo Rigora. You would just have to change him to the same format while noting that he's one of the 18 yakuma magics-- 01:38, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

I'll edit it, I'll also add "god" category to the actual's magic page just cause the magic actually summons one of the 18 battle gods instead of creating an actual page for it separately, feel free to look over-- 01:59, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

done I think, it actually makes alot of sense now thinking of it after reading that passage lol. feel free to add trivia or whatever 03:02, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Volume 41
Please check the Emergency Request of volume 41 if the Fairy Tail Manga. Mira points out that the 18 yakuma battle gods are not gods, so Tsungai is not one of the 18 battle gods.

yes where does it confirm that he is one of the 18 battle gods? I tried the link you provided but it came up empty. EspadaPrimera01 (talk) 01:59, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

I actually have all 63 volume in print and i tried the link again it shows him being summoned and Erza suggesting that Alok summoned one of the 18 war gods. I don't know if you can access it through crunchyroll because i only have the print version but the "Emergency Request! Explain the Mysteries of F.T." on pages 186-187 Mira states and I quote: "There were eighteen types of dangerous magics handed down through the Yakuma called the "Yakuma Eighteen Battle Gods." This was one of them." While this is from an older source than Ch 433 of the manga it never mentions summoning one of the 18 battle gods through this type of magic. I believe this is at least worth putting in the trivia of Tsungai or at least crating a new page explaining this. EspadaPrimera01 (talk) 02:26, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Ok sounds good. Thank you for the changes to the pages! EspadaPrimera01 (talk) 02:51, October 9, 2018 (UTC)

Lucy's Gemini Transformation Magic
Hello, in chapter 5 of the 100 year quest Lucy used Gemini's power turn everyone into fishes and Wendy into a jellyfish and since she was out of magic power as she said halfway turning herself into one. My question is, would that be Lucy's Gemini star dress power or just Gemini themselves?User:Shemar322 (talk)Shemar322 (talk) 12:47, October 9, 2018 (UTC)