User blog comment:FairyRaven/Fairy Tail Chapter 396: Air, Review and Commentary/@comment-74.61.219.92-20140813063447

Your review is actually good and bring up some questions I had myself. Personally though I would give it a 8/10 because of Torafusa's awesome ability.On the air thing it makes no sense since both Levy and Gajeel have panels with their mouths open when they are completely in the water. If you are underwater and you open you mouth water gets in and their is no way to push it out and logically speaking you would begin to choke and pass out. Also the more you hold your breathe the more tiring you will become so noway could Gajeel fight the way he was.

Also on the kiss/CPR even if Levy gave Gajeel air he still would have had to either drink or cough up the poison water. If he would have tried to cough it up more water would have gotten in his lungs rending giving more air useless and if he swallowed the water he would have passed out from the poison like the others. I understand this is a manga and all but you can't have logic effect 1 character but ignore the other. If Natsu and Lucy fainted so should have Gajeel and Levy. I also understand Hiro wants to give Gajeel his chance to shine and all but minor details and slip ups like these is what throws me off.

Something that also bothered me is where in the world is Horologium at this point. Lucy has been in countless dangerous situations and he hasn't popped up.