User blog comment:IamJakuhoRaikoben/2nd Official Fanon Competition/@comment-4829046-20120810165500/@comment-4829046-20120811143716

I'm sorry if the Synopsis is a bit long and the grammar is not in the same tense but what do you think? This is just something I came up with today. I copied the beginning from a web-comic I read. Most of the ideas come from my books.